Những Bài Luận Xin Học Bổng Hay Tiếng Viết

Bài luận xin học bổng (Personal Statement) là một yếu tố cực kỳ quan trọng trong bộ hồ sơ xin học bổng đại học Mỹ cũng như các nước có nền giáo dục hàng đầu khác như Canada, Úc, Anh… Trong bài viết này, Anh Ngữ Du Học ETEST sẽ gửi đến bạn những bài luận xin học bổng du học hay và kinh nghiệm viết bài luận học bổng để giúp bạn đạt được kết quả tốt nhất.

Bước 4: Phát triển ý tưởng, xây dựng nội dung bài luận xin học bổng

Sau khi đã có được ý tưởng và từ khóa cho bài luận xin học bổng, bạn bắt đầu xây dựng cấu trúc bài bằng cách sơ lược ra 5 đến 10 ý mà bạn nghĩ có thể sử dụng cho bài luận và cần xác định mối liên kết giữa chúng.

Không cần quá phức tạp, bạn có thể freewriting – chỉ ra các ý tưởng và vẽ biểu đồ, xếp chúng theo thứ tự hoặc bạn có thể làm điều gì đó khác, miễn sao cảm thấy hữu ích cho bài luận xin xin học bổng của mình.

Bài luận xin học bổng mẫu Saving the Manatees

It is a cliché to say that I’ve always known what I want to do with my life, but in my case it happens to be true. When I first visited Sea World as a young child, I fell in love with marine animals in general. Specifically, I felt drawn to manatees. I was compelled by their placid and friendly nature. I knew then and there that I wanted to dedicate my life to protecting these beautiful creatures.

Since that day in Orlando, I have spent much of my spare time learning everything there is to know about manatees. As a junior high and high school student, I attempted to read scholarly articles on manatees from scientific journals. I annoyed my friends and family with scientific facts about manatees– such as that they are close relatives of elephants–at the dinner table. I watched documentaries, and even mapped their migration pattern on a wall map my sister gave me for my birthday.

When I was chosen from hundreds of applicants to take part in a summer internship with Sea World, I fell even more in love with these gentle giants. I also learned a very important and valuable lesson: prior to this internship, I had imagined becoming a marine biologist, working directly with the animals in their care both in captivity and in the wild. However, during the internship, I discovered that this is not where my strengths lie. Unfortunately, I am not a strong student in science or math, which are required skills to become a marine biologist. Although this was a disheartening realization, I found that I possess other strengths can still be of great value to manatees and other endangered marine mammals: my skills as a public relations manager and communicator. During the internship, I helped write new lessons and presentations for elementary school groups visiting the park and developed a series of fun activities for children to help them learn more about manatees as well as conservation of endangered species in general. I also worked directly with the park’s conservation and communication director, and helped develop a new local outreach program designed to educate Floridians on how to avoid hitting a manatee when boating. My supervisor recommended me to the Save the Manatee Foundation so in addition to my full-time internship at Sea World, I interned with the Save the Manatee Foundation part-time. It was there that I witnessed the manatee rescue and conservation effort first hand, and worked directly with the marine biologists in developing fund-raising and awareness-raising campaigns. I found that the foundation’s social media presence was lacking, and, using skills I learned from Sea World, I helped them raise over $5,000 through a Twitter challenge, which we linked to the various social media outlets of the World Wildlife Federation.

While I know that your organization typically awards scholarships to students planning to major in disciplines directly related to conservation such as environmental studies or zoology, I feel that the public relations side of conservation is just as important as the actual work done on the ground. Whether it is reducing one’s carbon footprint, or saving the manatees, these are efforts that, in order to be successful, must involve the larger public. In fact, the relative success of the environmental movement today is largely due to a massive global public relations campaign that turned environmentalism from something scientific and obscure into something that is both fashionable and accessible to just about anyone. However, that success is being challenged more than ever before–especially here in the US, where an equally strong anti-environmental public relations campaign has taken hold. Therefore, conservationists need to start getting more creative.

I want to be a part of this renewed effort and use my natural abilities as a communicator to push back against the rather formidable forces behind the anti-environmentalist movement. I sincerely hope you will consider supporting this non-traditional avenue towards global sustainability and conservation. I have already been accepted to one of the most prestigious communications undergraduate programs in the country and I plan to minor in environmental studies. In addition, I maintain a relationship with my former supervisors at Save the Manatee and Sea World, who will be invaluable resources for finding employment upon graduation. I thank the committee for thinking outside the box in considering my application.

Bước 7: Lắng nghe góp ý, nhận xét sau khi viết luận tiếng Anh học bổng

Bạn hãy gửi bài luận xin học bổng mà bạn đã viết cho những người hiểu biết mà bạn tin tưởng, chẳng hạn như cha mẹ, người hướng dẫn hoặc anh chị của bạn, để nhận phản hồi của họ. Bạn sẽ có thể xác định các vấn đề mà bạn không thể nhìn thấy, chẳng hạn như các vấn đề trong trình bày, logic ý tưởng, v.v., bằng cách yêu cầu phản hồi và nhận các điều chỉnh.

Không dẫn vào bài luận bằng câu chuyện thời thơ ấu

Từ xưa đến nay, có rất nhiều bạn sử dụng câu chuyện thời thơ ấu để viện dẫn vào bài luận của mình. Chính những câu chuyện ấy khiến bạn trở nên kém chuyên nghiệp, chưa đủ trưởng thành và chưa đủ để họ tin tưởng. Sự bắt đầu sai lầm ấy khiến hội đồng cảm thấy nhàm chán, không hứng thú với bài luận văn xin học bổng của bạn

Nhiều bạn đã tham khảo sử dụng câu chuyện thời thơ ấu trong các bài luận của mình như một mở bài. Vì những câu chuyện này, bạn trở nên kém chuyên nghiệp, thiếu năng lực và đáng tin cậy hơn trong mắt họ. Hội đồng sẽ cảm thấy nhàm chán với các bài luận xin học bổng với mô típ như vậy

Bước 1: Xác định đối tượng độc giả và yêu cầu của bài luận

Mặc dù việc xác định các tiêu chí của bài luận là cần thiết, nhưng việc nghiên cứu và phân tích độc giả cũng quan trọng không kém. Hội đồng tuyển sinh của trường chính là độc giả cần hướng đến. Các bài luận xin học bổng hay thường nêu rõ những yêu cầu của trường đưa ra từ đó, thể hiện cá tính riêng của họ trong khi vẫn đảm bảo phù hợp với chủ đề.

Văn phong bài luận học bổng ngắn gọn

Bí quyết viết bài luận tiếng anh xin học bổng nên viết ngắn gọn, không lan man dài dòng. Điều này giúp bài luận trở nên logic và kết nối.

Bài luận mẫu xin học bổng Planners and Searchers

Being African, I recognize Africa’s need for home- grown talent in the form of “planners” (assistants with possible solutions) and “searchers” (those with desperate need) working towards international development. I represent both. Coming from Zimbabwe my greatest challenge is in helping to improve the livelihoods of developing nations through sustainable development and good governance principles. The need for policy-makers capable of employing cross-jurisdictional, and cross- disciplinary strategies to solve complex challenges cannot be under-emphasized; hence my application to this scholarship program.

After graduating from Africa University with an Honors degree in Sociology and Psychology, I am now seeking scholarship support to study in the United States at the Master’s level. My interest in democracy, elections, constitutionalism and development stems from my lasting interest in public policy issues. Accordingly, my current research interests in democracy and ethnic diversity require a deeper understanding of legal processes of constitutionalism and governance. As a Master’s student in the US, I intend to write articles on these subjects from the perspective of someone born, raised, and educated in Africa. I will bring a unique and much-needed perspective to my graduate program in the United States, and I will take the technical and theoretical knowledge from my graduate program back with me to Africa to further my career goals as a practitioner of good governance and community development.

To augment my theoretical understanding of governance and democratic practices, I worked with the Zimbabwe Election Support Network (ZESN) as a Programs Assistant in the Monitoring and Observation department. This not only enhanced my project management skills, but also developed my skills in research and producing communication materials. ZESN is Zimbabwe’s biggest election observation organization, and I had the responsibility of monitoring the political environment and producing monthly publications on human rights issues and electoral processes. These publications were disseminated to various civil society organizations, donors and other stakeholders. Now I intend to develop my career in order to enhance Africa’s capacity to advocate, write and vote for representative constitutions.

I also participated in a fellowship program at Africa University, where I gained greater insight into social development by teaching courses on entrepreneurship, free market economics, and development in needy communities. I worked with women in rural areas of Zimbabwe to setup income-generating projects such as the jatropha soap-making project. Managing such a project gave me great insight into how many simple initiatives can transform lives.

Your organization has a history of awarding scholarships to promising young students from the developing world in order to bring knowledge, skills and leadership abilities to their home communities. I have already done some of this work but I want to continue, and with your assistance, I can. The multidisciplinary focus of the development programs I am applying to in the US will provide me with the necessary skills to creatively address the economic and social development challenges and develop sound public policies for Third World countries. I thank you for your time and consideration for this prestigious award.